One of those smart people is the Producer who I'm working with on one of my development projects. Al Magee has been praised elsewhere, so let's dispense with that one right off the bat. A few weeks ago, we're having a meeting about this project, and after I talked in circles for a little while, Al said something that I found unbelievably trenchant:
The Brits used to make movies about "what happened." The Americans make movies about "what happens next." And we tend to get pushed into movies about "why it happened." Which as box office shows - nobody really gives a shit about.What happened. What happens next. Why it happened. Three simple phrases.
Two of them can lead to pretty good, or even great -- films and TV shows.
But the "Why..." The Why will kill you every time.
Canadian TV is forever about the why. Most of the time you will spend in a meeting with the network, they will want to talk about 'the why.' What you're saying, why the characters are doing this and that. We employ freelance 'story editors' on film, and even development TV projects. And if they've been raised under the Canadian system and they're doing their Telefilm best, they'll steer you clearly toward the shoals of "Why it happened." In the unlikely event that you do manage to score a scintilla of press coverage for a show, you're probably going to get asked questions about the why, and most creators who get a show will blather about the why given half a chance.
It's all specactularly wrongheaded.
Why?
(Oh come on, you knew that was coming.)
Before I unpack why 'Why it happened' leads us down a bad road, let's examine the reasons why the Canadian system has evolved that way (and for those who aren't Canadian, this is still instructive if you're a newbie writer because a lot of newbies play this game too):
1) The Desire for 'Cultural Importance.'
Many Canadian TV shows and movies, traditionally, have been developed by people who look at the dominant U.S. culture and find it wanting. They want to do shows that look as slick as U.S. shows but have "higher aspirations." That's why you couldn't swing a Dead Cat in a Development Pitch at a network a few years back without hearing "Six Feet Under." It's why FLASHPOINT getting on CBS is the most important thing everrrr... and why the P.R. for that show goes to great pains to point out how a straight-up CBS procedural is very different from U.S. cop shows.
Sometimes the people wielding the power in these situations are Producers who chafed under the industrial model, where U.S. creative would come up here and boss all the Canadian Line Producers around. One day, they vowed, we will do better.
Writers, too, usually see the writing on the wall. Those who want to sign up for the 'loftier sell' stick around, and those who have a more 'commercial bent' -- traditionally -- have lit out for L.A. at the first opportunity.
I could get into a cultural sidebar here and point out that every person I've ever met who talks about wanting to 'do better' than the U.S. culture generally reveal the more they talk, the less they really understand about the United States or Americans, and also how they fold in some pretty elitist ideas about Canadians, too...but that's a digression too far this morning.
The Desire for Cultural Importance is one of the main reasons why an actual, very Canadian show that's a huge worldwide success -- Stargate -- is never mentioned in the press here as a Canadian show. Even though ALL the key creative behind it are, in fact, Canadian.
It's also why everybody gets skittish about praising Trailer Park Boys. Look at Rob Salem having to defend his praise for the show in the Toronto Star because of 'outraged readers.'
Notice that both Stargate and Trailer Park Boys are shows that actually draw a dedicated audience. A measurable one, I mean. They have actual 'fans.'
The disconnect between shows that people watch and shows that fulfill the Desire for Cultural Importance is key.
2) The Government in the System
Telefilm, the CTF, all public funding of TeeVee and Flim requires you to blather on and on in documents about what this project does to further Canadian culture. Bureaucrats like reading about how this show will explain Canada to Canadians. The "Why," then, becomes the most important thing in the project to secure your fundings. The more time you spend talking about the why, the more it feeds back into the DNA of it. Why is also an easy thing for people to talk about. It's way easier to talk why than to talk story or character, because that discussion requires some level of craft or writing knowledge.
This pear-shaped discussion process leads to meetings where people tell comedy writers, "oh, we know it will be funny, but we want to talk about the heart," as if nailing the funny was the easiest thing in the world. And as if people tuned in to shows to see 'the heart.'
3) Unfamilarity with the Medium
There are a whole lot of people who make TV in this country who don't watch TeeVee. And a whole lot of people who make films who only see films at Film Festivals -- which is not how 90% of the viewing audience sees them.
The Tyranny of "Why this Happened," separates the makers of filmed entertainment from the consumers of filmed entertainment. It's one of the big reasons why so many shows fail to find an audience.
Why Why Sucks:
Tell me if this happens to you. Last week, watching a TV program with my Dad, I quietly endured the usual outbursts. My dad likes to try and 'figure things out.' In the opening scenes of a show, if a mystery is set up, my Dad will spend the next fifteen minutes saying, "he did it," or "I think it's her" or, sometimes, "they're related." -- whatever it is. Point is he's trying to figure out the mystery.
It doesn't matter that he's almost always wrong. The truth is that the only difference between my father and everybody else is that, um, he doesn't use his internal voice. We're all trying to figure things out all the time. That's how we derive pleasure from watching a show. In a comedy, we laugh out of anticipation, and then we laugh again out of surprise when it goes somewhere different from where we think it's going. In drama, one of the reasons why procedurals are so popular is that desire to figure out why. The reason why they're satisfying and hold our attention is because most people try to figure it out, and delight when they can't. That's what keeps them watching.
In both cases, what do you notice about people? They're not the monolithic couch potatoes they're supposed to be. They're engaged in the process. They're trying to imbue meaning, and their search for that meaning is the thing that makes them like the show. LOST is entertaining because we all try to figure out the mystery, and never quite get there.
Marshall McLuhan famously deconstructed his visions of media, and described TV as a 'cool' medium, meaning that we need to do more work to extract meaning from it. That, in fact, is the point.
The problem with making a show about 'why it happened' then, is that you are fundamentally robbing the audience of their part in the transaction.
They're the ones who get to decide what it means.
If you remove them from that process by making your show all about explaining, or lecturing, or hammering home the why and the theme, you are actually forcing the audience to disengage, not further engage in your presentation.
A light sprinkling of theme helps to focus you -- but only if you're focused on the what happened, or what happens next. If you spend all your time thinking about 'why,' then you are almost guaranteeing that you'll wind up with something that's not engaging to the viewer.
Which, by the numbers, seems to be most scripted Canadian TV.
Sounds simple when you put it that way, don't it?
25 rumbles:
I'm not quite getting this - Denis, can you give an example of a why it happened show or episode and in what way it is a why it happened?
Absolutely superb entry today DMc. Succinct and dead on the money - no pun intended.
It is because Canadian TV and film rely on government money that it is focused on "the why". Entertainment is a dirty word. But wouldn't they all love to have greenlit a Sopranos, or LOST or any of dozens of other shows.
Ah well - that's Canada.
Though it has become ironic that the more Canadian the show, the less likely you will get greenlit because the focus of the networks, including CBC, is US sales. Hence, you can watch The Tudors, but go in and pitch a period series to the CBC and no one is interested.
Or you can pitch a Sci-fi to CTV (owner of Space) and they tell you very politely that while your concept and script are great - they don't have the money - i.e., they won't spend the money they have on sci-fi. So, they are happy to pay for 6 out of 10 sci-fi - which includes Stargate as its genesis is American, and the new Fox show Defying Gravity.
I hear that the same people who bring us "The Tudors" are now gearing up to make "Camelot" - I expect CBC to announce that any day now.
Greg, unfortunately nope. I'm not gonna do that. Because I have in the past and gotten hilariously overwrought letters from creators quoting their NY Times reviews or whatnot "proving me wrong."
It's a taste issue. There are dozens of Canadian shows that exhibit this "why it happened" myopia in their development. I'm sure you could come up with four or five yourself if you thought about it.
On the positive side, I will point once more to CORNER GAS. There is a show that is successful and connects with its audience because it doesn't worry about the why.
On the drama side, one of the death knells is when they start talking about "Shakesperean themes." I mean, Slings & Arrows was literally about Shakesperean themes -- and it worked because the STORY BEATS were foreground, and way more important. They allowed the audience to pick up the resonances for themselves.
Frequent poster here who goes by the handle "Frank Dolly Dillon" made a caustic comment on another blog -- "there comes a time when you realize you're only making it for the crew."
I refuse to buy that. I refuse to accept that's the way it has to be. And I refuse to play the blame game where you put it on everybody else. Writers have to wear this one too.
you always make the show for the crew. they are the biggest fans and the harshest critics. they are, once you get "real" with them, the best focus group you can ever have. to try and guess what is going to sell past that is a waste of time. it is certainly not an admission of failure, but merely a statement that "in the moment" they are the only focus group you have
Oh. Okay -- I misread that then. That's fine. Yeah, I don't know if I wrote that here but a real eyeopening moment for me this year was being on set and hearing wardrobe explain the plot of the next script to hair and makeup. It was really cool.
I think you have to think about the audience beyond the crew, though. I don't know how you don't wind up with something solipsistic and precious if you don't.
i don't know what that word means
Nail, meet Hammer...
Good one, Ace. It explains a lot that was lost in the ether of why Canadian TV is different than American TV...
As the pilot said to the co-pilot:
"Landings are no problem. It's the right approach that's the bitch."
I hear some of what you're saying here... But I have to disagree with a lot of it. The "why" is a fundamental question for certain kinds of shows - why is a character doing this? Even the shows you mention - Lost and Sopranos - spend a lot of screen time answering that question. In Lost, the "why" is quite often the flashbacks (or, now, flashforwards) that illustrate "why" these characters are on the island (usually distilled to a particular theme for that episode). And in Sopranos, the "why" was Tony's sessions with the therapist. Sopranos was totally different than most (if not all) mob dramas BECAUSE it cared about the "why".
I think you're right in that, if you're doing a straight-up procedural, the "why" should be the end-game -- the whodunnit, etc. But if what you're creating is a character drama, then "why" has to be at the centre of everything. I'll use Degrassi as an example of a show that was all about the "why" and, whether you like or respect it or not, it's been a very big success. Every single episode questions why: why is Paige raped in Season 2. Why is Craig bipolar. The whole point of that show is to illustrate why things happen, and it's in its 8th season and had a global reach.
Answering why - and then dramatizing it in a way that is, well, DRAMATIC - is hard. But it's necessary for certain kinds of shows. Take Buffy The Vampire Slayer -- my all-time favorite. Teen girl slaying vampires, but the heart of that show was "why" she was having to do that, and "why" she was struggling week-in-week-out with her mundane teen issues. And correct me if I'm wrong, but doesn't Flashpoint delve into "why" a hell of a lot more than most procedurals do? And it's clearly a huge success.
But you're right, if we are starting with "why" as a blanket requirement for all genres we're creating, then that doesn't necessarily make sense - and could help explain why many of our shows have failed. But it's not a "Canadian" thing - the few things I've done in the US, a LOT of time was spent answering "why". All things in moderation...
i think part of the frustration DMC is alluding to is that you go into a pitch meeting or development deal and spin a yarn -- like you're pitching some kind of cop show and you tell the tale of the first episode and perhaps even beyond and you've worked out your "what ifs" and you "and thens" and leave the first episode in an exciting place and the first question out of the exec's mouth is
why is joe a cop? and maybe the first episode should be an exploration of why he made that choice
and then you go home and watch vic mackie blow someone's head off
Aaron,
I think you're getting hung up on the semantics here, when what I'm really talking about is the emphasis.
Clearly you have to have some consideration of 'why' in your process, if simply to understand what the motivation of your characters are. Mamet's three rules of drama Who are you, what do you want, why now...
...there's a why in there, right, but it goes back to character, not "explaining why the world works." That is why in its proper context.
Let's take your examples:
LOST's flashbacks are character revealing, and progress in story beats. But the BIG why -- why did the plane crash and why are they on this island -- is the thing that everyone is still arguing about.
When was the last time you heard anyone arguing about what something meant in a Canadian show?
It never happens, because it's spelled out, because the process here for the most part abhors letting the audience interpret it for themselves. The idea of "it could mean this, it could mean that" is anathema -- they want you to nail it down and have it be clear. Crystal clear. No room for doubt. And that's as enjoyable as a prostate exam.
Let's move on to Tony Soprano. For six and a half seasons they played out that question of whether Tony was savable. Could the man be redeemed? Was there good in him too? Vic Mackey, the same thing.
In the Canadian version of the Sopranos, by the end of the first hour you would have to know unequivocably a) what did the ducks mean? and b) you would have to state or suggest that Tony will never ever change -- that in fact, this show is about the fact that nobody ever really changes.
In Buffy the genius was that high school is life and death to teenagers. Now have someone who actually has to deal with life and death, and the life and death stuff is no more important than the teenage stuff -- both are equal. That was genius, and the audience was allowed to surmise that for themselves.
I think Buffy started to lose its way the moment she left high school and they actually did start grappling with the "why..." questions. It was less fun. By the time she came back from the dead it was just a drag. It had collapsed under the weight of the why this happened. HOUSE is heading in that direction too.
It's probably inevitable that all shows go that way. But it's not inevitable that you strangle them in the crib.
The procedural 'why' is merely level one stuff. It's simple and it gives you a chance to set up a thing that people can figure out and be complete within the hour.
The deeper questions of why that are at the heart of those meaty U.S. dramas are ones that are allowed to build up through the course of the run. Where you spend your energy is on the what, the what next's and the and thens -- and in the spinning of those you manage to have wonderful scenes that give you a glimpse of why into the character -- while at the same time moving the story forward. That's where you have to spend your time, and your creative energy.
By being overly concerned by "WHAT YOU'RE TRYING TO SAY" you shortchange the finer pleasures of crafting subtlety and action and character that pays off down the road.
In this way, 90 percent of Canadian drama reads like a particularly earnest first novel - a form which is also often overly fixated on WHAT YOU'RE TRYING TO SAY.
And yup, Degrassi has certainly been a successful brand, but going back to the original storied show -- that first blush of American recognition came because people looked at it and couldn't believe teenagers were being treated seriously.
The show might be a worldwide success, sure -- but those Canadian ratings are nothing to sneeze at now. And you can argue that the Degrassi moment is past. What's the buzz show that kids are all about? Hannah Montana, High School Musical -- shows that don't care about why.
I have no problem talking about why. I have a problem spending all your time and your script real estate explaining or driving home 'why' questions -- instead of doing what The Sopranos, House, Six Feet, The Shield, and Buffy did -- which was spinning really great characters and what, what nows, what ifs and and thens.
Again -- we can take the easy route and bitch about poor promotion and all the other things that ARE stacked against us, or we can take a cue from the old Shakespeare and realize that the fault dear Brutus lies not in our stars, but in ourselves...
put me in the category of the people slightly confused without a specific example of a canadian show that spends too much on the "why"...
it makes perfect sense, i'm grasping what you're saying, but if there was a canadian show or film that you could point to and say, "that spends too much time on the why" it would be helpful - which i know isn't an ideal request because it opens you up to potential attack.
it's easy to say "here's a show that get's it right" but sometimes we need to see specifics of shows that get it wrong.
i know you love "c.r.a.z.y" i love that film, and it fits this argument perfectly, it doesn't explore the why, it's just a story that moves forward.
i do, however, feel like i need an example of the opposite to have that "aha!" feeling...
Then I'd suggest searching the "Canadian Television" archives and do a bit of reading between the lines. I'm just not wading in on this one. I'm tired of getting sniped at, sorry.
fair enough.
Making the "why" central to your drama is death death death.
Putting the question up front creates a few hazards:
1. You're building a polemic or your story is an outlet for dogma.
2. You're forcing yourself and your audience into an analytical frame of mind at the start of the story. You are, in fact, putting distance between the audience and the characters by asking and answering the question.
It's like watching the Masked Magician show you the the trick. Once your curiosity is slaked, the game is over.
3. You answers will be either overly simplistic or headed down a rabbit hole that begs more analysis. It is no longer a story. It's therapy.
No wonder Canadians are perceived as cold, bloodless and boring.
Here it is in a nutshell:
Why Why Why
You hear the question enough times and you want to scream, "Just shut up and listen to the story."
What Happened = Good
What Happens Next = Best
Why it happened = Boring
Am I reading that right?
Incidentally, isn't the whole 'What happens next' thing the major point of having act outs in the first place?
Great article, Denis! You've actually helped me figure out a problem I was having with one of my scenes! ;)
One show that does explore the "why" with success, is IN TREATMENT. (Hmmm, a therapy show.)
But they don't do it with "I hate my mother because..."
They have their characters tell stories. "When I was sixteen, I stayed with my..."
Pile enough of the stories together and you can infer the why, which is what character-based drama is all about.
In Honour of Wil's post, I just wanted to share this with you all:
Everything's Amazing, Nobody's Happy
Great post. I think if you try to cover all the "whys", you risk the "who cares" response from the other side of the tube.
I tried to get into the first season of Sophie (disclaimer: Ms. Brown = bonafide talent + screen beauty) but found that mostly everything was provided for in terms of answers to questions raised about her predicament. Not a bad show, certainly in execution, but after showing me their hand -- who cares.
I still think you’re a dick, but you wrote a really good piece here.
The 'why' that you speak of is, I think, the theme of a piece. Which is important, but often people misunderstand what the theme really is, and tack on something separate from the story to make the theme. For instance, a comedy's theme is whatever makes it comedic - that's the 'why' of the show, and that's the theme, and there might be deeper things going on there but those deeper things will relate to that humour, will draw their power from it. The same goes true for a procedural, where the power of the theme will draw directly from the mystery.
The problem is that a lot of non-writers (literature-studying academics especially) developed this idea that you can write a story from the top down (the way they analyze them) instead of from the bottom up. So they try to drop a theme on top of a story, and they think that the cherry on top of the cupcake is more important than all of the rest of the cupcake (plot, characters, setting) combined. In places like Canada, this often comes out as attempting to tack on some sort of inappropriate theme like 'this story happens because the characters are Canadian, and that makes them special and all that is nice and honest in this universe.' Sorry, but unless the theme *directly develops* from the characters, plot and setting of the story, then the audience won't care. And most likely they still won't care in this case, because the sort of story that would naturally provide the above sort of theme is going to be a navel-gazing worthless piece of propaganda.
We have to be careful not to get tripped up in jargon here.
A lot of people who argue the 'why' side like to talk about it being 'more than just plot.'
I dislike the term 'plot' because it's too reductive. 'Story' covers wider ground because it's PLOT + CHARACTER + THEME -- in every scene, moving forward. THAT is story.
Theme is also an argument. It's ONE argument, and if it's best, you have the seeds of the counter argument in there too. The "why this happened" part of it comes from the viewer synthesizing what they think out of it.
The ending to The Sopranos was brilliant. Why? Because the "he was whacked" people and the "no, life just goes on" people will argue that ending forever. What was 'meant' was irrelevant. The transaction made by the individual audience members keeps it alive.
Your point about the top down influence of academia is fine as far as it goes. But if we want to back off and say, "what's the nut of it?" It's this:
where do you spend the bulk of your time?
In Canadian development, and often in shows, they spend too much time on the why, and not enough proving out the story -- plot and character and theme all together.
It's easier to sit around talking about the why and convince yourself you're doing something rilly, rilly important.
I'm agreeing with you here, and just trying to say that I think these people you're talking about, the developers who focus on the 'why', are taking a top-down approach in the same way that academics too often do. Comes from thinking like bureaucrats, I suppose . . ..
What's the response? Maybe: write the script, get everything working in a way that clicks, and then analyze it from the outside to find the theme / the 'why' that the bureaucrats want to hear about, and tell them that part? I know a lot of artists who use this sort of process when applying for fine arts funding. But TV and film, are they too collaborative for this strategy to pay off?
Dude, that was the smartest, most focused piece I've read on your blog that wasn't written by a monster in a closet.
The next step might be to extrapolate it into politics, where the oration of (the best) leaders across the pond and south of the border tell us what we could feel, while here at home we get pols telling us what a real Canadian should feel.
Kind of like what McCain tried.
But never mind. I like that you're talking about the TeeVee again.
"The problem with making a show about 'why it happened' then, is that you are fundamentally robbing the audience of their part in the transaction."
That's it right there. Good one.
I agree completely, though I'm an U.S. writer and haven't had any dealings with the CBC, other than watching the occasional series that makes it onto my netflicks queue. I write character based stuff, and I am horrified by writing that seeks to explain why people are doing what they are doing. Too often, this comes out as exposition, and can easily be patronizing, telling the audience things they don't need to know. Great movies and television shows tell us why only when it advances the story.
Great blog -- keep up the good work!
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