Thursday, August 9, 2007

Burn Notice and The Takeaway: Not Just For Curry and Chinese Food


I AM really enjoying Burn Notice. It's not just that Jeffrey Donovan gets to play a character that's way better (but still just as dangerous) as the guy he played in Touching Evil; it's that old hybrid juice flowing freely. It's amazing that you can mix and match genres so much, slap on a fresh coat of paint, and come up with something that feels so fresh.

For those who haven't seen the show -- the premise is simple. Donovan plays a spy who finds out that there's a "Burn Notice" out on him; which means he's persona non grata. His accounts are frozen, he's got nothing, and he's dropped in Miami and told he can't go anywhere. In Miami is an old friend who's keeping tabs on him for the FBI (Bruce Campbell) and an ex-IRA ex-Girlfriend (Gabrielle Anwar). To top it all off, he gets to relive and reconnect with his mother (Sharon Gless.) Now he has to pass the time and eke out a living working cases and helping people til he can figure out why he was burned.

Pretty nifty combo of a number of items:
  • Light serialization (ie: Veronica Mars style)
  • Romantic comedy will-they-or-won't-they stuff
  • Family Problems
  • Spy stuff
  • Investigations
  • Witty Voiceover
Jill Golick's got a great breakdown of the pilot for Burn Notice here.

The mixmaster of story items make for a light and escapist viewing experience. You get a hit of House-like impossible relationship with mom, a bit o' sexy sexy with Fiona (Anwar's character); some buddy-buddy with Campbell, and the episodic investigation plot...

...and it's this plot that gave me a sudden brainwave.

Because what I really liked about it is that about twice during each show there's what I call a couple of "MacGyver Moments." That's where Donovan explains in witty voiceover, some aspect of spycraft using everyday materials...Ie: most 40 dollar garden lights have a pretty good motion sensor, you can shoot through drywall just around the door, etc, etc.

(Someone who's seen the show, if you can come up with more specific examples of what I'm talking about from Burn Notice; put 'em in the comments and I'll do an edit to give more examples here -- I just don't have time to go back and rewatch)

The MacGyver moments aren't just entertaining, they actually send you away with some cool fact or truth you didn't know before. And that's tremendously satisfying.

In fact, it puts me in mind of West Wing (as most good things in TV do.) Because one of my favorite things about watching the early, Sorkin-era episodes was that in every episode you learned a fun, strange little fact about American governance (which way the seal of the U.S. faces, the fact that the government doesn't execute people on the Sabbath, how we built 100 000 airplanes before WWII, etc, etc.)

On XM radio, they're about to launch an all-Presidential Election channel called POTUS. It's worth noting, I think that before West Wing, nobody really knew that acronym. The pilot for West Wing put that out there for everybody.

It was a little something to take away.

The "takeaway," in fact, is something that they were obsessed with in my former life as a (shudder) lifestyle TV writer. All those makeover and design shows, the Holmes on Homes and Debbie Travis'es and Queer Eyes are all about building in "takeaways" -- useful bits of knowledge the audience can take away with them and apply in their own lives. (Or not.)

Now in dramatic terms, not many of us have practical uses for knowing little bits of spycraft. But that doesn't mean it's not cool. And anyway, all those shows on the Travel Channel aren't really so you know the Top Ten Places to Go in Helsinki because they actually think you're going to go there. They know that 90% of us are going to stay with asses firmly planted in couch. But still -- it's nice to learn something new.

USA has actually done a brilliant job of extending this aspect of Burn Notice into its online offerings. They actually have a series of "Spy Tips" on their site. Oh sure, they're less funny than Ask a Ninja...but they're actually...useful. They're fun. Go watch.

And oh yeah, they've got a writers' blog, too.

This can get into dangerous territory with some projects, and some writers, because you can turn into a bit of a research wank. (Well, here's an interesting bit of Tudor-era crockery...) But if the subject is fun and interesting, the nice thing about building in a takeaway is that it a) makes your audience feel like they've learned something (smart) and b) makes your world more realistic and involving (smarter.)

So when you're working up those scripts, ask yourself, is there room to give the audience a little bit of a takeaway?

I'll have chips with mine, please. Yum.

8 rumbles:

wcdixon said...

My my my...aren't you being a 'crafty' little boy of late.

We used to call that takeaway beat a 'Carson' back in the room...as in "Hmmm, I did not know that."

Rae said...

How about... "If you're going to put prints on a gun, sticking in someone's hand isn't going to do it. Any decent lawyer can explain prints on a gun. But try explaining prints on the inside of the trigger assembly."

Or, "Actually, losing a tail isn't about driving fast. A high-speed pursuit is just gonna land you on the 6:00 news. So you just keep driving like an idiot until the other guy makes a mistake."

Tamaryn said...

You beat me to it. I too am loving burn notice and was going to write a blog about it...but alas...I just read a majority of what I was going to say here...so humph. ;)

Variety reported that the show's got an early green light for season two...and holds the highest ratings in that time slot on basic cable, I think. Something good anyways.

It's a top-notch show, and I'm love that it's filmed on location in Miami - gives it a real authentic feeling.

The MacGyver moments are also my favorite sequences and I LOVE the witty VO. Too funny.

Rob said...

Burn Notice is terrific stuff. I was actually reminded most of The A-Team because of the way the jobs are set up and tend to topple a big criminal operation in the end, as well as the focus on the con.

By the way, the head turning on the Presidential Seal bit on The West Wing is a myth:

http://www.snopes.com/history/american/turnhead.asp

I believed it, too.

T.O. WRITRESS said...

Testify!

Enjoyed it since ep1, and have been slobbering all over it since. Like I said on Facebook, it shall be a must spec show. :)

john dassow said...

My favorite 'MacGyver moment' so far:

You can turn an old TV into an oscilloscope to detect listening devices. If you don't mind running the risk of electrocuting yourself.

I like it because it's plausible and has the extra touch of realism. Fooling with TV electronics is dangerous, big capacitors with big charges.

Callaghan said...

Is it on in Canada, or do I turn to the trusty "other" way of getting shows?

Looking for a new show to spec...

spencer said...

Because one of my favorite things about watching the early, Sorkin-era episodes was that in every episode you learned a fun, strange little fact about American governance (which way the seal of the U.S. faces, the fact that the government doesn't execute people on the Sabbath, how we built 100 000 airplanes before WWII, etc, etc.)

Not to be a nitpicker (yeah, I know - too late), but that bit about the US seal is apparently not actually true:

http://www.snopes.com/history/american/turnhead.asp

More on topic, the only thing I don't like about Burn Notice is the music. Great show that I am enjoying a lot more than I expected to.