
It's been proven time and time again that competition is good, so long as it's fair. In fact, competition makes creative people better. No Revolver, no Pet Sounds and all that.
And so the teeter-totter between the great competing "behind the scenes of a comedy show" series.
In response to my post of a couple weeks back, where I reluctantly admitted that maybe 30 Rock was the show with momentum, commenter Robyn posted this question, and link:
What do you think about this piece, which basically says Studio 60 fails because it talks too little about comedy writing?Well. I think that piece is pretty much dead on the money. But wait, sports fans...let's go to the tape.
Studio 60 is coming up at the three-quarter turn...precisely because they've decided that maybe, just maybe, the comedy is the way to go.
It's always interesting to see shows adjust their ground game -- once they get past the inital panic of "are we going to get pulled," "are we going to get picked up?" Dramas, especially, take some time to find their feet. There's tons of examples to cite, so I'm going to punt and not cite any, but trust me when I say if you love a show that ran a while, it's not on the strength of Episodes 1 through 6. Even if Episode 1 was pretty good.
I thought Episode 1 of Studio 60 was pretty good. I stuck with it. I stuck with it even when it started to trough. But along about the time that second John Goodman episode aired, I was starting to seriously lose my religion.
But judging by the last two weeks, the ship has more than righted itself. It's more like Sorkin has gotten a clearer idea of what he wants the show to be. And Hallejuhah, apparently he wants it to be funny.
Last night's episode (which airs Monday night if you're south of the 49) managed, in parts, to approximate some rat-a-tat Front Page sensibility. There's a lightness that works when smacked against the ponderous stuff, which, of course you're never going to get rid of -- it's still Sorkin.
But like a lot of shows when they find their feet, Studio 60 is starting to make some key adjustments. As the article linked above demonstrates, the addition of Mark McKinney, writer and now performer, as the sardonic, doesn't find anything funny writer -- is a masterstroke. And slowly, they're fleshing out the personalities of the new writers -- and connecting them to the larger cast.
Add to that one of the big problems from the pilot: that P.A. character who seemed like she was important and never went anywhere? Well, now she's Matt's assistant. So Matt has a foil. Check. This time, it's not Bradley Whitford who gets a Donna. Time will tell if the chemistry between Perry and the actress playing his assistant reaches or even attempts to reach that level -- but it's definitely a step in the right direction.
The cynicysm that underlies the writers' attempts to torpedo Matt's Christmas spirit was well handled. And the nice thing is that for once, Mr. Smartypants Sorkin didn't bust out his usual textbook kid who knows all the answers thing, and tie a bow on the cliche that it's ALWAYS been Jews in Hollywood who've been most into pushing the Christmas spirit. Irving Berlin? White Christmas? Hello?
And don't even get me started on Nazi Claus.
The gold standard of behind the scenes shows was always Larry Sanders, which turned on Larry's self importance, meanness and self-absorption. That was never a formula that was going to work for Studio 60. But with the lightness of the latest episode, they finally found the way to counterpoint the heavy stuff; it's cause of the joyful fast moving bits, that the spectacle of the New Orleans tribute really, truly landed.
And as an added bonus: the Canadian TV writing tip. When they introduced Mark McKinney's character in the last ep, they told you off the top that he's a former writer for the show whose wife and son were killed in a car accident.
As the hostage taking story played out in the B.G., never once did they make that text again. They'd told you what his history was -- you were expected to infer into all the subsequent discussions how he might just be looking at the unfolding action a little differently than anyone else...
In Canada, you would have gotten the note: "remind people why he's feeling what he's feeling" And that would have killed it. But unless you were particularly vicious, persuasive, or foolhardy, you would not have been able to talk a Canadian gatekeeper out of that note. Lesson one.
Studio 60 is back, baby. It's back.
and in an unrelated note...this week's Battlestar Galactica looks like it has the Sci-Fi fans saying "ho hum" -- but I thought it was one of the best uses of flashback and non linear structure I'd ever seen. The contrast between the gritty hardness of the present of the Galactica crew -- and the element that we haven't seen before -- the time when New Caprica still offered hope...was sublime. And the revelation of all that had been hinted at in the subtext was pretty satisfying, too. Great writing. This is one I'm going to go back and watch again the next time I need to tackle flashback structure.
But I fear the gulf between BSG's "genre" fans and its "drama" fans is going to grow ever wider. It's clear that Ron Moore isn't interested in pandering to the tropes of the genre. And sci-fi fans love their tropes.

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Not to say I told you so to all you Tina Fey crushers, but ...
I love that the show stars are crushing on Lucy the writer! And yes, D, you're right, Sorkin went for the non-obvious Jewish jokes in the Christmas episode. It was all so damn good.
All hail Mark McKinney, comic genius and all round nice guy, too. And Ed Asner, too. If that plotline goes where I hope it is, super stuff's a-comin'.
And not to spoil it for anyone who hasn't seen it yet, but OY!, when he finally did say it, even though I knew it was coming, Lord it was satisfying. Boys, write down that line you're serious. It WILL work, quite possibly even on a total stranger.
In terms of the ship righting itself, I found it interesting that all three execs (Jordan, Jack and Mr. Grant) all came down on the same side of the FCC fight. Are they all good guys now.
(spoiler ahoy)
Also nice for Sorkin fans: Bradley doesn't have to wait six or seven seasons to declare his love this time.
I'm a big BSG fan, but Starbuck is not at all a believable or likeable character any more for me. She's like a delinquent 13 year old girl. So annoyimng. I hope they kill her off, have a state funeral, then bump the character of Cat up. Starbuck is a fool.
I know this ep was a cheapy to cover the costs of the fantastic episode 4, but it felt like the drama was pulled out of their asses.
I did like Adama's speech though.
Nice observations...yer right, it's finding itself - and eps 1-6 are usually warm up episodes for any series out there that eventually rocked.
But this one:
"In Canada, you would have gotten the note: "remind people why he's feeling what he's feeling" And that would have killed it. But unless you were particularly vicious, persuasive, or foolhardy, you would not have been able to talk a Canadian gatekeeper out of that note. Lesson one."
Ha! I mean, yes in Canada you'd get that note...but if you would not have been able to talk the gatekeeper out of it, what's the lesson here? Don't write the runner in the first place? That's kinda sad. no?
Ah...but I didn't say who the lesson was for now did I?
I loved this week's BSG. Loved it because it stuck in my head long after, even after my initial 'Dee and Sam need to ditch those assholes and have hot athletic kids' mood. I hate Lee and I hate Kara, and I love that I do because you rarely feel -ambivalent- about BSG characters.
I liked the episode so much because it seemed to me to be about making the Big Decisions and how you end up living with them after the fact. It was really interesting to see the contrast between Laura and Bill as opposed to the others - that quiet, unhurried togetherness as opposed Lee and Kara desperately setting a whole chain of events in motion that messed up way more people than just them.
I'm still thinking about it; it's too bad that the SciFi-Fan types aren't recieving it well, 'cause I think it was up among the better episodes, even if only because it signals the end of Starbuck/Apollo tension. I hope.
The New Orleans musicians was almost too much. But I've enjoyed the rest of Studio 60 (well enough, anyway), so I enjoyed this.
Lucy Davis alone is enough to distract me from Sorkin's worst habits (and those two characters better stay away from her), but now Mark McKinney makes me enjoy anything I'm seeing.
Wanna mess with your own head? Watch this episode of Studio 60 with all the cheery Christmas and love crap, then watch the title sequence to Dexter right after it.
Oh, and what happened to only having registered comments?
I like being able to join in now.
I guess I'm officially a BSG drama fan, because I loved this week's episode. Either of the ep's love stories--Sbuck/Apollo & Adama/Crew would have been a barf fest if they hadn't been woven into fight night.
Not to mention that Starbuck continues to be the most vividly written, realistically portrayed alcholic I've ever seen on television. Yes, of course she's annoying, if you're healthy and never had an up close and personal look at dysfunction. But if you're unlucky enough to know exactly what her breath smells like when she leans over to taunt Apollo, then watching her arc is powerfully cathartic.
I don't know how you write better television than that, although I fully intend to spend my life trying.
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